Why are your eyes so beautiful? D:

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Shao~!

Hint: Lord Page was murdered about 500 years earlier...

But yes, it's turned out well. I still think it might be more effective with her jaw visible in the second panel, but works well as it is.

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"'tis well-known that the English have tails! You have not, so you are not English."
--Arnold of Todi, The Box of Delights

I really like the art and the flow of the images. :3 Good work as usual. I think the second panel is perfect; it lets the emotion be expressed in the ears and the eyes, playing the shock quite nicely.

Just have a few critiques, though.

One is that I think you should space the central three panels more evenly, and maybe enlarge them a little so that the layout is tighter.

The hand in the third panel looks odd because it looks like there's only one joint in the fingers instead of two (unless that's an aspect of Keaton's physiology?).

Third thing is that it's slightly odd for Keaton's eyes to be so widely dilated *and* have such a big shine on the surface of her eyes. I can understand if the light source is off to the side and most of the environment is dimly lit, but it's still a little odd. It's a hard thing to determine when the the rest of the picture isn't colored/shaded, and when it's taken so out of context, but it's just something I wanted to note. If the environment isn't terribly dim, you should shrink the pupils; I bet you could have some fun detailing the irises that way, too. ;3

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